Story Recommendation – Last Train Home

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Story Recommendation - Last Train Home

Female dom­i­na­tion sto­ries too often reduce the Mis­tress to a one-​dimensional fig­ure, with­out thoughts or feel­ings, with­out her own emo­tional needs and inse­cu­ri­ties. The prob­lem with that because the ‘Mis­tress’ is just a stick-​figure, the con­tent is lim­ited to the mun­dane and stereo­typ­i­cal where the Mis­tress sim­ply abuses the male slave, and puts ‘it’ through a series of humil­i­a­tions. Gen­er­ally the feel­ing by the end is that you have read it all before — read one read them all.

How­ever, in Christina Marshall’s ‘Last Train Home’, at last there is a Domme with a dif­fer­ence. This Domme is a real per­son, a woman with a life, a career, opin­ions and thoughts, as well as desires and quite com­pul­sive needs. Her train jour­ney begins unevent­fully enough with rumi­na­tions about her life and day, but she quickly insti­gates the tense and emo­tional dom­i­na­tion of a total stranger. This from the very small­est inci­dent, builds into a very sat­is­fy­ing cli­max where lives are changed. The nice thinmg here is that the Domme is not sim­ply respond­ing to the usual mun­dane ‘script’ (Mis­tress says X, slave does Y), she is respond­ing and act­ing at the behest of her own needs and desires. It is a story which makes a real step for­ward in ‘femme domme’ sto­ries, and is all the more sat­is­fy­ing for that.

The author Christina Mar­shall is her­self a dom­i­nant woman, with a vari­ety of rela­tion­ships with sub­mis­sive men past and present. The cen­tral core of the story is based on a true inci­dent which occured on a late night train jour­ney to Edin­burgh. I per­son­ally found the story to be engag­ing and (unusu­ally) at no point at all pre­dictable — you are kept going all the way right through to the end. Recommended.

A very supe­rior femme domme story, refresh­ingly 3-​dimensional in that the Mis­tress is not just a ‘dom­i­na­trix’, but a real per­son, impelled by her own emotions.


 

To con­tinue read­ing, please visit the sites below to down­load the full story!

Down­load from Ama­zon UK

Down­load from Ama­zon USA

Female domination stories too often reduce the Mistress to a one-dimensional figure, without thoughts or feelings, without her own emotional needs and insecurities. The problem with that because the ‘Mistress’ is just a stick-figure, the content is limited to the mundane and stereotypical where the Mistress simply abuses the male slave, and puts ‘it’ through a series of humiliations. Generally the feeling by the end is that you have read it all before – read one read them all.

However, in Christina Marshall’s ‘Last Train Home’, at last there is a Domme with a difference. This Domme is a real person, a woman with a life, a career, opinions and thoughts, as well as desires and quite compulsive needs. Her train journey begins uneventfully enough with ruminations about her life and day, but she quickly instigates the tense and emotional domination of a total stranger. This from the very smallest incident, builds into a very satisfying climax where lives are changed. The nice thinmg here is that the Domme is not simply responding to the usual mundane ‘script’ (Mistress says X, slave does Y), she is responding and acting at the behest of her own needs and desires. It is a story which makes a real step forward in ‘femme domme’ stories, and is all the more satisfying for that.

The author Christina Marshall is herself a dominant woman, with a variety of relationships with submissive men past and present. The central core of the story is based on a true incident which occured on a late night train journey to Edinburgh. I personally found the story to be engaging and (unusually) at no point at all predictable – you are kept going all the way right through to the end. Recommended.

A very superior femme domme story, refreshingly 3-dimensional in that the Mistress is not just a ‘dominatrix’, but a real person, impelled by her own emotions.

 

 
 

To continue reading, please visit the sites below to download the full story!

Download from Amazon UK

Download from Amazon USA

 

 

February 1, 2012  Tags: , , , , , , , , , ,   Posted in: writing

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